Narratives

We have been learning to write the orientation and complication of a narrative. We hope you enjoying reading our ideas. We would love your comments too :)

Once there was a girl named Selena Sing. She lived in a hut that she made on a beach in New York.One day a storm came and the roof came off.....Selena knew she had to do something it rained and rained and wind came through. She got soaking wet. She climbed trees to get bark and coconuts and she began building.....
By Kimberly

CROC THE STRONG & BRAVE CAVEMAN

Many years ago lived a strong & brave caveman called 'Croc' He was home eating his supper and thunder loudly crashed on the brick roof and dozens of bricks tumbled down and he was trapped!!Croc felt worried and then the soup boiled his feet''Owww!''he cried''somebody help me NOW!"

By Bailey

Once there was a tiny count dracula his name was Blook. He was sleeping in a coffin suddenly he was awoken by a stormy weather......

He tried to get out to investigate but he couldn't! He was getting sat on by a evil teacher called the fierce storm maker Miss O'Brien!!

By Sonya

Once there was a girl named Sophie, she was short and had orange hair she was also quite a snoop.She liked to explore things. One night she was in the garden when there was a storm...Sophie ran to a part of the garden where it was sheltered and she is could see better, she needed to find out the cause of the stormy weather it was summer and there was usually no bad weather. She looked up and saw in the dim light of the moon a pale faced girl riding on a whitish rain cloud, so this was the cause!
By Alisha

Character Descriptions

We have been learning to write a character description about our parents. We focused on using lots of adjectives and similes. How do you think we did?

My Mum and Dad

My dad has curly black hair. He has brown eyes and they shine wherever he goes. He is really kind and caring. My dad looks like he is always calm and he is also very tall.

My mum’s hair is like a beautiful black horse and her brown eyes are like a brown diamond. My mum’s lips are like candy. Her teeth are like a pearl. My mum’s clothes are like a colourful flower. My mum’s clothes are like a pretty beauty pageant girls.

By Meah

My Mum

My mum is beautiful like a queen. My Mum’s eyes are like a hazel nut and her hair is brown and curly like a horse’s hair. Her lips are shiny like a ruby. My mum is busy because she has 3 kids and also she has to cook as well. I get to help her so she can take her time.

By Angelique

 My Dad

My dad looks smart, as smart as a doctor. He has white skin. He is an Indian from Delhi the capital of India. His eyes are as blue as the sea. My dad’s hair is as white as paper.  His beard is as black as the wheels on a bus. His bones are as hard as metal. He is happy and he is 7 foot. He has long legs and he is 42 years old. He loves playing soccer. My dad is a master at pushups and he is a faster runner than me. He has muscles.

By Gurmehar

Zefrank Flowers

Sparkler  by Bailey Liu

"Joyride" by Daniel T. Made on zefrank.com/flowers

By Keshav